Animish 2504 - Episode 01

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Animish 2504 - Episode 01 Jan 1, 2005 4:12:11 GMT -6

Post by Iyouboushi on Jan 1, 2005 4:12:11 GMT -6

Episode 01 - The Space Warriors

After an Earth ship is destroyed by a mysterious race, The United Earth must come to terms with what's happened and decide what to do.

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Last Edit: Nov 5, 2005 17:16:12 GMT -6 by Iyouboushi

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Animish 2504 - Episode 01 Jan 4, 2005 15:54:31 GMT -6

Post by Iyouboushi on Jan 4, 2005 15:54:31 GMT -6

Episode one received a small touchup today as I fixed a few minor mistakes that I saw (and some that were pointed out to me by a guy who reviewed it) and tried to show things on camera rather than just telling the reader (eg: when the second in command dies I merely stated that fact but now I show the second in command in a pool of blood, dead, to make sure the audience SEES it).

Overall, I believe the pilot is just about done. There's probably a few more mistakes that I didn't catch time around but I will eventually.

Last Edit: Jan 4, 2005 15:54:54 GMT -6 by Iyouboushi